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Floating: A Memoir

2013-01-19 15:42:31 by Luke
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Hey guys.
I recently finished my latest writing project, it is a fictional memoir of a man named Derek.
The memoir focuses on Derek's addiction to cocaine, and his addiction to his girlfriend, Elisabeth.
There are many tales told within, of drug abuse, relationships, alcoholism, and so on.
I can only say so much.
I'd appreciate it if it would be read and left criticism as well, I am beginning to pick up writing again and have finished two projects this year so far.

"There she was, off in the distance. A shadow, a silhouette. A figure unknown, unknown to everybody but me. I could just tell, I just knew, I had that feeling. The girl of my dreams, the love of my life.
She stood at the edge of the bridge's rails. She looked down, looked up. I couldn't see it, but I could feel it. A menacing grin, it felt evil. So unlike her.
She looked toward me, again, I couldn't see this, but I could feel it. Her eyes pierced through mine, into my brain. She'd stare at me the entire way down. She'd fall, staring at me. Not losing that eye contact. She'd hit the water, and she'd die. Floating away from me, further and further away. All I could do was stand there and watch her, the love of my life, my soul mate, my second half. I'd watch her float, and I'd never see her again."

The story / fictional memoir can be read here:

Floating


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YellowisCOOLYellowisCOOL

2013-02-08 23:04:41

Sounds awesome. I'm not really into those sorts of books but I think it would appeal to a lot of people.
I didn't read the whole thing (too long for me lol) but I think it's great. Keep it up.


KajenxKajenx

2013-01-19 18:42:58

Haha, sorry NG, that was a low blow. Now I feel bad.

Luke responds:

lolol


KajenxKajenx

2013-01-19 18:42:33

Why not post it on the writing portal here?

Oh wait...


PIED3PIED3

2013-01-19 17:38:32

You ain't gonna get many readers hosting it on that site:
"Warning
This writing is rated Mature and may contain material unsuitable for readers under 18.
In order to view this writing you must log in."

Luke responds:

Oh damn, it makes readers log in? I may fix that then, thanks for pointing that out, PIED.


LabraxadoresLabraxadores

2013-01-19 16:40:14

I will surely read that when I have time. Sounds interesting.

Luke responds:

Thank you, friend.
Tell me what you think of it, please. I appreciate it.