Beautiful
I love everything about this one, def gonna drop a track with this beat... Keep your eyes peeled, this instrumental is a true gem.
Beautiful
I love everything about this one, def gonna drop a track with this beat... Keep your eyes peeled, this instrumental is a true gem.
This is good
I'm really digging this for the most part man, from what I know if instrumental-ism, this is sweet.
But the one thing bothering me is the "hey" or "heh" --- whatever that is. It would be tolerable if it was just used for the hook part of the instrumental, but I think it happens too often.
Besides that, solid - Diggin it!
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Very mediocre lyricism, as rappers lyricism is important. It's obvious that this track was meant to be a serious one - And it isn't bad, but it needs better lyricism... One syllable rhymes are weak, you can do better.
Your just mad cuz you can't spit fire like us.
POOP STINKS
WYZE...
SLAP HAPPY HAS FUNNY BARS AND STUFF, BUT HIS STYLE BOTHERS ME, HIS VOICE IS ANNOYING TO ME.. HIS FLOW IS KIND OF OFF AT A FEW PARTS IN THE SECOND VERSE OF HIS, AND HE JUST DIDN'T BRING ENOUGH TO THE TABLE TO COMPETE WITH WYZE..
WYZE MURKED THE BARS, STRAIGHT RAW - AGRESSIVE ONSLAUGHT OF BARS.
HE'S GOT MY VOTE.
Hmmm...
Not digging Fat Beats flow at all, or voice, or delivery... Sounds VERY mediocre.
Unfortuantely, I'm not really feeling HeavyUrb either, so this is a really difficult decision for me.
Fat Beats is too quiet in a way, I don't like the flow and the voice is quite annoying in a way. BUT, he still has my vote.
Heavy Urb's flow is quite a bit off, or maybe his voice is just way too loud over the beat, making it hard to tell. Lots of his lines seemed slurred and it sounds as if he had difficulty pronouncing them or something.
So Fat Beats has my vote this round.
Prepare for fire....
To be spat!
Recording on this today, hot 16 ready to murk it.
Will hit you up with a link within the next few hours..... STUDIO TIIIIIME!
Looking forward to hearing it man
Disagreeing with Mao!!!!
I think the beat and the lyrics go just fine together.
Storytelling is great, solid track. Really feeling it man!
Thanks man, glad you liked it. Fun fact: this beat was inspired by Immortal Techniques Crimes of the Heart
Without hesitation
I will not explain this, but I give the win to ER.
Wasn't really feeling JACKs.
Sorry bro!
Cool vote bro
Drink water.
Age 30
Joined on 10/24/07